Desultorif (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} desultorif) wrote in mullibok, |
I agree with the above comment. When I saw the pic, I thought that the chick in the blue top was the focus and that her friends were badly blurred, while the people in the background were ok.
With the bowling one... I don't know...I am not too keen on it. Aside from the excess of blonde hair in those three pics. Alone, the pic is good. But, in the group, it looks like a lot of dead space and there is something about the directions my eyes move when looking at the three... the one on the left lets my eyes move up and down. The conversation has them moving left and write and the bowling one has them moving down into the center and focused on some bright pink ball.. I don't know if that makes any sense...but, I would replace the bowlling one :-D
OTHERWISE... Nice Brochure!
With the bowling one... I don't know...I am not too keen on it. Aside from the excess of blonde hair in those three pics. Alone, the pic is good. But, in the group, it looks like a lot of dead space and there is something about the directions my eyes move when looking at the three... the one on the left lets my eyes move up and down. The conversation has them moving left and write and the bowling one has them moving down into the center and focused on some bright pink ball.. I don't know if that makes any sense...but, I would replace the bowlling one :-D
OTHERWISE... Nice Brochure!
