Chris ([info]mullibok) wrote,
@ 2007-08-16 12:35:00
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Your help needed!
Very much looking for some feedback from people who are not so tied into the Lake Street area! We've had more than enough of those comments to last us a lifetime. So please let me know what you think of this brochure we are making. Opinions especially welcome on the middle picture on the cover (with the people eating and laughing), and on the shot that is TO THE LEFT OF the bowling girl (NOT the girl herself, the one to the left). But all other comments welcome to. Except on any spelling or grammar things, I guarantee we're already working on those.





You can also download the PDF here to take a closer look, it's about 3 MB.

Thank you!

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[info]desultorif
2007-08-17 07:45 am UTC (link)
I agree with the above comment. When I saw the pic, I thought that the chick in the blue top was the focus and that her friends were badly blurred, while the people in the background were ok.

With the bowling one... I don't know...I am not too keen on it. Aside from the excess of blonde hair in those three pics. Alone, the pic is good. But, in the group, it looks like a lot of dead space and there is something about the directions my eyes move when looking at the three... the one on the left lets my eyes move up and down. The conversation has them moving left and write and the bowling one has them moving down into the center and focused on some bright pink ball.. I don't know if that makes any sense...but, I would replace the bowlling one :-D

OTHERWISE... Nice Brochure!

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[info]mullibok
2007-08-17 12:29 pm UTC (link)
But what of the one to the LEFT of the bowlign one?

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(Anonymous)
2007-08-17 07:09 pm UTC (link)
I think it fits. My issue is with the bowling one...it doesn't fit with the other two. Alone, it is a good pic.
If you want to keep the bowling one that is fine. But, I am not too keen on it in the group.

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